tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1551796276475754601.post383705948359312058..comments2023-09-17T01:41:55.706-07:00Comments on The Chrysalis Experiment: SpiteJenniferhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11607802957626812670noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1551796276475754601.post-91713905087021785072011-03-20T17:51:44.275-07:002011-03-20T17:51:44.275-07:00I thought it was just the drugs that put her to sl...I thought it was just the drugs that put her to sleep. I was also thinking that it would be kind of ironic if she lived because that's what she's afraid of most.Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607802957626812670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1551796276475754601.post-20631919389200474552011-03-20T17:00:00.658-07:002011-03-20T17:00:00.658-07:00I did wonder if it was going to be her death, but ...I did wonder if it was going to be her death, but yeah it wasn't particularly clear :P But I guess when you die you can't really know you died, because you're too dead to know it. Hehe. Not that I'd know :O I promise I am NOT a zombie!Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1551796276475754601.post-46197798721985477502011-03-20T08:16:16.703-07:002011-03-20T08:16:16.703-07:00Haha, thanks you guys. Actually, the ending was su...Haha, thanks you guys. Actually, the ending was supposed to be her death. (Since she closes her eyes and never opens them again.) I guess I'll either have to make that clearer or write more, eh? :PWinternoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1551796276475754601.post-21815844745817480572011-03-19T23:15:32.564-07:002011-03-19T23:15:32.564-07:00I liked how she compared her disease to ostrich le...I liked how she compared her disease to ostrich legs and then an eagle. -sigh- So imaginative.Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1551796276475754601.post-40950932259840202532011-03-19T12:10:28.560-07:002011-03-19T12:10:28.560-07:00I really enjoyed this! It reminded me of so many t...I really enjoyed this! It reminded me of so many things at once. Nicely done!Jeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16533424312167293180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1551796276475754601.post-39372040201746723392011-03-19T04:49:18.907-07:002011-03-19T04:49:18.907-07:00Dude. This doesn't feel finished.
I feel so s...Dude. This doesn't feel finished.<br /><br />I feel so sorry for this chick! Gahh! I guess it's the power of great storytelling, right there. Great job!Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1551796276475754601.post-57095389915528554222011-03-18T19:03:58.752-07:002011-03-18T19:03:58.752-07:00Wow...I really like the way you handled the POV ch...Wow...I really like the way you handled the POV change from third-person to first-person. That's hard to do. Very nice!Michaelhttp://writerwithaslinky.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1551796276475754601.post-88088737393412522002011-03-18T16:29:41.471-07:002011-03-18T16:29:41.471-07:00Oooooh. Is there more?Oooooh. Is there more?Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11607802957626812670noreply@blogger.com